‘Secrets’ and a Blacksmith: Crafting Tradition and Innovation

I hope you have enjoyed the sunshine and warmth of June, when the UK sampled temperatures nearing those in the tropics! In North Yorkshire the heather is ready to bloom, bringing swathes of lush purple to the vast expanses of moorland. It is a truly beautiful and everchanging landscape.

Another beautiful county that I visited recently in the South West of England was Somerset. When I stopped at a garden centre I came across a working blacksmiths’ forge and felt as though I’d taken a step back in time. Instantly thoughts of Wilfred Underwood, Imogen’s father in Secrets, came to mind. Although we tend to think of smithing as a traditional craft of yesteryear, the charming owner soon corrected that impression.

There is still a demand for the old skills, used now for restoration work, preserving items from the past. This requires the mastery of the trade and knowledge of old methods, material, tools and skillset of the original worker to recreate or mend the item in question. Past imperfections are what makes an old item interesting today.

We live in a time where we have more technical accuracy and, perhaps as a consequence, less individuality. Science has moved on, providing precision tools and improved understanding of the process, yet a modern day blacksmith has to embrace and learn the old ways as well as the new.

Old skills are called upon to mend traditional machines and objects, some still used in other local trades like the local butcher’s grinder, along with reproducing such basic items as the imperfect nails made at a smithy’s before mass production. Each repair has to be done in the style and materials of that bygone age, but today’s Blacksmith also has to build on this historic knowledge by keeping up to date with modern, contemporary designs changes in style, tools, markets and techniques.

There is a long apprenticeship still required, for this labour of love, as science and art combine.

Historically, a chestnut tree was planted near the large forecourt providing shade and was symbolically associated with the trade. Yorkshire wrought iron was and is highly prized for its quality.

In Secrets Imogen’s father, Wilfred Underwood, is the blacksmith for my fictitious village of Dibbledale – a tranquil unspoilt place inspired by such villages as Hutton-le-Hole in the North Yorkshire Moors Park. His trade was central to the local community for the upkeep of agricultural equipment, as a farrier, and the many other jobs concerning the mending of household and trade goods. Wilfred, a gentle giant of a man, also encouraged Imogen’s creative nature providing her with fine tools and wire to make delicate jewellery, deepening the bond between father and daughter.

Secrets and their consequences worm their way between Micah and Imogen. Will they be able to save Dibbledale’s peace and tranquillity? Only when secrets are revealed can devoted friends be distinguished from destructive foes and allow love to find its true home.

From a writing perspective there is a fine balance between keeping historical fiction accurate to the period it is written about, and accessible to a modern reader, who may be unfamiliar with that period of history.

Trades, like everyday language, evolve and adapt through time. The visual importance and need of a central blacksmith may have changed, but in Regency they were essential and central to a thriving village community. They were also excellently placed to see and hear all the comings and goings of the villagers and pick up information from travellers who crossed their paths. Wilfred as a character is able to keep his finger on the pulse of local events.

I would like to greet and thank my new readers in the United States as well as the UK and Australia who have read and enjoyed Betrayal – Book 1 of Friends and Foes Regency romantic adventure series. The

I hope you go on to read the completed trilogy and discover what happens to Lord Farrington, an enigmatic character who features in Book 3 Silent Revenge , which will be published in paperback on 5th July. More about him next time!

July’s bargain book is The Baronet’s Prize, which is now 77p/$1, which also available on KindleUnlimited.

“A delicious Regency! Eleanor is horrified to be made homeless by her brother’s gambling debts and still more disturbed to find herself falling in love with the man who won the estate. Valerie Holmes resolves this dilemma in a spirited tale that keeps you turning the pages until the final “Ah!” of satisfaction.”
GL Robinson, New York USA, Regency romance author.

Reviews left on Amazon (and sites such as Goodreads) are always welcomed and appreciated by authors, especially if the book has been read and enjoyed. They are what keeps the algorithms working in the competitive world of publishing.

I would love to hear from my readers, wherever in the world you are based, and also from visitors to the region.

Have a lovely and safe weekend.

Secrets and Betrayals: A Historical Fiction Trilogy

“A well told tale set in a time when women and ‘ladies’ were expected to obey their master’s and ‘betters’. Here we have a feisty young woman who challenges the rules to her own advantage.”

Val Wood

1814, North Yorkshire, England

The trilogy of #FriendsandFoes begins with ‘Betrayal’ in its simplest and cruel form of the breaking of trust and the abuse of power. The early nineteenth century was a time of war, change and strict social dependencies. The landed gentry held power, and the bulk of the population served, in trade, in houses, or fought for their country overseas against the might of Napoleon’s army.

When a woman of status lost their main male relative, they fell into a void where marriage, or service as a housekeeper or governess prevented them from falling low. In Betrayal Lord and Lady Bagby own a vast estate in the fictitious growing market town of Beckton. Lord Bagby takes advantage of governess, Miss Georgina Davey. This spawns a web of lies and deceit from which Miss Lydia Fletcher tries to rescue her. Lydia’s own situation and silence is controlled and manipulated by the need to keep her ailing father’s tenancy in one of the Bagby estate cottages.

Enter Lord Samuel Speers, a qualified Edinburgh surgeon who is trying to locate his lost cousin, whose last known position was at Bagby Hall. Aided by his friend Lord Farrington, an Intelligence Officer to Lord Wellington, who soon realises that the Bagby’s have taken betrayal to an unimaginable scale.

Whilst finding his cousin, Speers has to accept his future role as head of the family estate following his beloved brother’s death.

The interplay of plot and the threads of deceit that run through the core and sub-plots give the story plenty of room for character development, as the external and inner conflicts arise and clash. We all like to think that in any given situation we would do the ‘right’ thing, but fortunately few of us are tested to the limit. In fiction, characters can be tested – and as authors we can determine who will rise and fall, whilst being true to the personalities that have been created. Hiding their flaws, playing with motivation and loyalties all add depth and credibility to each.

Personally, I love a happy or hopeful ending so my novels inspire and uplift after the adventure has played out. I hope my readers agree. Please leave comments below.

Secrets the second book in the series will be on Kindle countdown Amazon.co.uk from 15th June to 22nd June. In it you meet another friend of Lord Farrington the inspirational Lieutenant Micah Arrow, who has a vision to preserve his home village of Dibbledale, marry for love, and offer hope to returning soldiers – can his dreams be fulfilled? Find out in Secrets.

Silent Revenge brings the trilogy to a close with Lord Farrington’s return home, but after years oversees fighting a very visible enemy, he is now seeking a homegrown one, unaware that he and his family are in great danger from an unseen one.

Reviews are especially important in this highly competitive business, so please leave your honest feedback on Amazon and/or Goodreads.

As a special thank you to my readers Phoebe’s Challenge is 77p/$1 throughout June.

Have a lovely June!

Secrets of Dibbledale: A Story of Love and Adventure

May’s welcome sunshine seems to be reflected in the vibrant yellow gorse, brightening the moorland, whilst the aroma of the wild garlic’s delicate white flowers lightens shady woodland banks.

Whether walking through the ancient pathway of Saltburn Gill from the coast or strolling through the grandeur of the grounds of Fountains Abbey and Studley Royal, Mother Nature certainly lifts the spirits and inspires, as it did in Secrets for Lord Farrington’s friend and life-saver Micah Arrow.

The trees were finally showing their new leaves as yellow broom made for a colourful bank in the lane’s hedgerow that dipped towards Dibbledale. Saint Cuthbert’s parish church and the vicarage were on a small hill just outside the village. Micah stopped to admire the newly bloomed clumps of primrose nestling amongst the grass. He breathed deeply – he was home and at peace. Picking his way through the grass, he admired the budding bluebells pushing their way upward. Spring was a time of revival and that is what he planned for Dibbledale.

Dibbledale is a fictitious village, which has elements of real locations, such as, tranquil Hutton-le-Hole and Great Ayton. The latter being where the explorer James Cook went to school. They are villages that have largely remained unspoilt by modernisation and industry, which is what returning soldier Micah Arrow wants to preserve for his family. After witnessing the horrors of war first-hand, peace is what he craves.

Appealing as any setting is, North Yorkshire has dramatic wild beauty throughout the seasons, it acts as a historic backdrop to the characters and their adventures. In writing as in life, you need moments of light and shade to give depth and pace. Here a moment of quiet reflection turns when Micah senses danger…

Micah swung a leg over a fallen tree trunk, but then, as the metal’s edge caught his eye, he mantraps, never had he seen such things around Dibbledale. The woodland had always been open to all. The food it provided was free, the fallen trees taken as needed by the villagers for repairs – so what had changed?…’

Secrets will be on a Kindle Countdown from the 15th to 22nd June on Amazon.co.uk and is freely available on KindleUnlimited now. Micah is an important character to Lord Farrington and reappears in Silent Revenge.

As a thank you to my readers the newly re-edited to extended version of Phoebe’s Challenge is available at 77p till the end of May.

England, North Yorkshire, 1813
Miss Phoebe Elgie and her younger brother, Thomas, flee when an accident results in them being labelled ‘machine breakers’ in the cotton mill where fate had them trapped.
Hunted, with nowhere to run, they are aided by a mysterious stranger called Matthew. They soon discover that he is a man who appears to assume a variety of roles.
Phoebe instinctively trusts Matthew, unlike Thomas who doubts. She is drawn to this stranger; lives and destiny intertwine as their journey crosses the path of smugglers and traitors. This hinders their quest to uncover the truth behind the demise of their family, which left them so vulnerable.
Phoebe’s challenge is three-fold.
She must secure their escape beyond the reach of the overseers of the mill and the crime they have been accused of...

Uncover what happened to their mother.

Cope with the confusion of her developing friendship with the mysterious, Matthew, and determine if there could be a future for them.

Swept along by the swiftness of the serious events that dog their progress to uncover the truth, Phoebe struggles to overcome and resolve these challenges.
Determined, Phoebe has no time to doubt, but how will she succeed…?

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Embracing Spring: A Time for Renewal and Reflection

Spring is here! After the shorter colder days of winter it is glorious to see nature bursting forth with colour again. It is a season of renewal, regrowth, and new life, so it was a devastating shock and with heavy heart that I am sharing that, for my family, April opened with sad news of another dear friend losing their battle with cancer.

Jill was inspirational in the way she faced her diagnosis, coped with the treatments, and rose to the challenge.

Much as I love writing and have plans for further personal regeneration of this site, when life’s challenges – or death’s – hits, time takes on a unique perspective. Arrangements need to be made as grief is processed and change is not a choice, but a stark fact. Jill was a brave and humble lady who would not have wanted anyone’s world to be rocked by her passing. This season is one of longer, sunnier days and Easter a time of light and hope – and Jill had the latter in abundance.

Life continues, and Spring has burst forth in all its glory, the bluebells are in full bloom,  wild garlic releases it aroma over beautiful white floral carpets and the birdsong is uplifting.

I would like to thank all my readers on both sides of ‘the pond’ for choosing to read Silent Revenge . If you enjoyed Lord Farrington and Jemima’s story then please leave a fair and unbiased review on Amazon or Goodreads. They are so important to authors, especially in these highly competitive days of algorithms. The paperback will be available for the summer… more about that next month!

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Celebrate Mother’s Day with Silent Revenge: an exciting Regency adventure!

Mother’s Day is rapidly approaching, which also means that my pre-order Regency novel, Silent Revenge, is about to go live on #Kindleunlimted and #Kindle. I am so excited to announce this as it has been a labour of love completing my #FriendandFoes trilogy.

Intelligence Officer, widower, Lord Oscar Farrington, returns to his family estate with mixed emotions. This is unsettling for the powerful, charismatic, and loyal officer who likes to be in control of his own feelings. With his overseas duties finally completed, there is talk of insurgence within the country, so he is still under orders to gather intelligence on his own countrymen, another cause for inner conflict as he has fought alongside his fellow soldiers and has some sympathy for the plight of the returnees.

Sworn never to remarry, he is devoted to his young, adopted daughter, Jessica, who he rescued with her mother in Betrayal. But Lord Farrington of all people should know ‘never to say never’, especially when Miss Jemima Parkes re-enters his life.

Silent Revenge keeps the reader turning the pages and is available for pre-order now!

My other news is that the large print edition of The Baronet’s Prize is available for order directly form the publishers Ulverscroft or via Commonwealth libraries. The original short novel is also available on Kindle.

All my novels are set in the beautiful country of North Yorkshire, England. Littered amongst the actual places of Whitby, York, Harrogate and Northallerton are my fictitious market towns of Gorebeck, Beckton and Dibbledale, which are loosely based on the picturesque Helmsley, Guisborough and Hutton-le-Hole. Please share your favourite places to visit within the region.

Enjoy the coming of Spring and if it triggers the desire to start a new project, write your own adventure, then please check out my manuscript appraisal page. I have over twenty-five years  of experience as a creative writing tutor and love to encourage new writers to explore this fascinating world of possibilities.

Exploring Character Journeys: Upcoming Releases & Updates

Welcome to my new monthly news update. I have had a lapse in posting, but not in writing, and am very excited to announce that Silent Revenge will soon be available for pre-order. This book is close to my heart as it is dedicated to a lifelong friend and supporter, Sue, who sadly died far too soon, and never managed to enjoy Lord Farrington’s last adventure.

Since 2003 I have enjoyed working as a Creative Writing Tutor allowing me to connect with many fellow writers, both published and unpublished, across the globe. Each student unique in their life experiences, yet all share that inner desire to create stories for others to enjoy. This I will continue to do independently, through this website.

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Love the Adventure

To-Love-Honour-and-Obey-267x400Fifty novellas ago, I began writing love stories each wrapped around an adventure, set against the rugged beauty of the North Riding of Yorkshire. These found their home in the Commonwealth library market and from this base a further six novels have evolved.

When To Love Honour and Obey published by Sapere Books, was reviewed by a fellow author, he described it as ‘Where Poldark meets Heathcliff’ – I was delighted.

I have always loved reading both fiction and non-fiction exploring the Regency period. I enjoy the romance whether written from the perspective of the rigid society of London’s ‘Ton’, so beautifully portrayed by Georgette Heyer and more recently Julia Quinn, or the melodrama of the darker more menacing shadows of Daphne du Maurier’s Jamaica Inn.

Basically, my tastes cross genres within the period, from Jane Austen’s and the Bronte’s classics to E.V. Thompson’s20240126_161100 Cornish sagas, or Bernard Cornwell’s action and adventure series about the rifleman who rose from the ranks, Richard Sharpe.

I have worked as a creative writing tutor for years and one piece of advice commonly given to authors starting out, is to write about what you know. That does not mean that you must know everything first – no one can, especially where murder and mayhem is involved. Without a time-travel machine, a writer today cannot depict a bygone age with total accuracy capturing the language, attitude, beliefs, habits, understanding of people centuries ago when travel and knowledge were limited.

Research is the key! Whatever the genre; romance, crime, thriller, horror, fantasy or any other preferred, the author must accrue enough knowledge beforehand to write their story and make it credible and believable to today’s readership. Jane Austen was of course writing in her own time; about the world she knew.

Research can be all encompassing when it is focussed on a topic you are enthusiastic about. In first drafts ‘info-dumps’ can creep into a manuscript, slowing the pace of the story. Which is where an editor’s skills are needed to take out the non-essential information, as the author will always know more that the reader needs to about their created ‘world’.

DSC03023When I began writing I thought about the ‘write about what you know’ advice and started exploring my home area. The North Yorkshire Moors and the bay towns from Whitby to Saltburn provided a dramatic backdrop for many of my stories.

Saltburn-by-the-Sea had its own infamous ‘King of Smugglers’ John Andrew, who in 1780 was landlord of the unique Ship Inn, which nestles to this day under the shadow of the 110m high Huntcliff. My fictitious Ebton is based on Saltburn, my Coble Inn nestles in the shadow of Stangcliffe, the headland based on Huntcliff.

 “We’re on Stangcliffe, the headland!” Joshua exclaimed, as realisation hit him harder than the force of the wind. He was inches away from a sheer drop to the sea below where sharp-edged rocks hid under each of the crashing waves…

To Love, Honour and Obey Sapere Books

To Have and To Hold
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This Jurassic coastline encompasses rugged high cliffs and sweeping flat sandy bays. The wild moor inland would have been crossed by locals along small tracks for centuries by the Regency period. The dales, areas of fertile farmland and woodland, dropped down from the moors, with ancient abbeys and small villages of stone-built cottages nestled  within – but cottage industries were being replaced as manufacturing developed in the growing towns causing population shifts, consequently impacting livelihoods, Secrets, due to the Industrial Revolution, a theme resonated in To Have and To Hold, Sapere Books.

Unrest was growing nationally, the Luddite movement triggered fear in Parliament that revolution would happen in England as it had in France. In Phoebe’s Challenge, brother and sister are hunted as machine-breakers – punishment was  anything from a fine, to hanging or transportation to Australia.

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Friends & Foes Book 2

My books are not dark, but touch on the darker side of human-nature and society, Betrayal, ultimately showing that love and justice will win the day. In real life things may not always work out that way, but in fiction – which is a form of escape from reality – in my stories at least, things do.

The world of Valerie Holmes has the tagline ‘Love the adventure’ – a sentiment that I hope my readers will share.

Beyond the book cover, plot and protagonist, which has a greater influence on your choice as a reader: the physical setting or the period in which it is set?

Please share your thoughts and preferences.

If you are interested in writing, and want to create your own fiction, but need some professional guidance or support, please contact me via my manuscript appraisal page.

I am delighted to announce that Discovering Ellie is now available in Large Print Paperback for those who cannot manage an eReader – just click here

Valerie Holmes novellas. 99p each available in

A Woman’s Options in Regency England.

1811-1820

“It is always incomprehensible to a man that a woman should ever refuse an offer of marriage.”

Jane Austen, Emma

Jane Austen

When George III was declared unfit to function as monarch his son, the Prince of Wales, became the Prince Regent. George the younger had little interest in politics, leaving the wars with France to the politicians, whilst he indulged his friends and himself with a lavish lifestyle of elegance and fashion. The Ton – from the French phrase ‘le bon ton’ meaning ‘elegant style’ represent the fashionable society of London – an elite group. The divide between the extremes of the rich of Mayfair, London, and the poor of St Giles, living in the city slums, could not have been more dramatic.

In Parliament seats in the House of Lords were inherited and in the House of Commons could be corruptly bought, so the working and fighting man and the women who relied upon them, who made up most of the population, had little representation to improve their lot. My stories are set in the north of England away from the Ton and Parliament, but life was influenced by their wars, laws, and taxes.

In the above quote Jane Austen expressed a commonly held view, because women of the time had few legal rights as their lives were basically controlled by men.

Upper- and middle-class single females, under the age of twenty-one in England and Wales, were usually dependent upon their father or nearest male relative. If their male relatives were honest, caring, and loving family members then amicable matches secured the future of both parties, in hopefully wedded bliss, once the dowry, pin money, inheritance and jointure, in the event of death of the husband, had been legally agreed.

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However, fiction requires drama and conflict to spark a good plot, driven by engaging characters. It also reflects the unpalatable truth of the past.

If their male relative were greedy (For Richer, For Poorer), an irresponsible gambler (The Baronet’s Prize) or an overbearing parent (Hannah of Harpham Hall) then the young woman would have few options, left to her own devices unless they had the help of a hero, or a woman of independent means.

baronets prize (2) (1)When Ellie (Discovering Ellie) is faced with a marriage match, she tries to diplomatically decline her aunt’s intentions without causing further conflict…

“I am not worldly, Aunt. I cannot think how I could make such a man happy…”

Mrs Hemming laughed. “Well, we agree on one point at least, you cannot think!”

Ellie ignored the insult and continued in her conciliatory tone. “I fear I would only annoy him. Therefore, I wish to politely decline this marriage proposal, discreetly of course, before it is made public. I do not want to cause further embarrassment to anyone. Then he would be able to find a more suitable companion, equal to the task.”

Ellie is completely dependent upon her aunt’s charity until she turns twenty-one. This dependency drives the plot,discovering ellie as Ellie must discover who she is, why she has a recurring nightmare, and how she can avoid a match that is being arranged ‘for her own good’ before it is publicly announced. This latter point is especially important because once it was made public, to break such a legal proclamation would be considered scandalous. Ellie is naïve and knows little of the law, or of the greater world, as many young women of the time.

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In a situation where an engagement is made between two people if broken, then it could result in a legal action of  ‘breach of promise’. At the very least a reputation could be tarnished or destroyed as happened with Lucas Huntley – In Sickness and in Health.

In England, the Marriage Act of 1753 declared both parties had to have their parents’ consent if under 21. However, in Scotland this was not the case, hence the rush for elopements to the nearest place to wed north of the border, such as the famous, Gretna Green, which provided a reason for a mad dash in For Richer, For Poorer.

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It is often claimed that fact is often stranger than fiction, but with historical facts the trigger for dramatic fiction is constantly there. Although women were ruled by the law, deemed unable to run their own lives, own their own wealth or children when married, deny their husband sex, or have rights to defend themselves when employed, there would have been plenty who questioned why this was so, such as:

“I do not wish them [women] to have power over men; but over themselves.”
Mary Wollstonecraft, A Vindication of the Rights of Woman.

Lydia Fletcher in Betrayal was so influenced. Heroines need to have obstacles to overcome, situations that are a mystery, and the realisation that not all men look upon them in the same light.

Being single by choice was not really an option for a woman, no matter how much she desired to be the arbiter of her own fate. Unless her social status and personal income had been legally entailed and could support her, like the independent Miss Parkes of Penny Manor who befriends Ellie, she would be dependent upon others.

If young women were sufficiently educated, they could try to earn a living as a companion or a governess/teacher, but these were lonely situations with no long-term security. Uneducated or poorer women had less desirable options such as going into service, leaving the cottage to work within the factory or working the land to feed their families. In, To Love, Honour and Obey, Beth is an orphan who has no family or male relative to protect her from the system that was supposed to protect her.

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Prostitution was an option for the truly desperate. Few climbed the social ladder to a happy and long life even as a rich man’s mistress. Although some beauties and actresses managed to acquire rich patrons, such as the exceptional Harriett Mellon, born a pauper in Cork, Ireland but who ended up married to Thomas Coutts of the banking family, who successfully inherited and managed a fortune..

Servants were supposed to be chaste and could be dismissed without reference or notice if they fell pregnant. They were also open to abuse from their employers, as happens to the kindly Georgina in Betrayal. Again, as I write love stories that are aimed to provide adventure and uplift rather than depress, Georgina’s future is much brighter than many a maid who found themselves pregnant and thrown out on the streets without a reference, through no fault of their own.

hannahThank you for taking time out to read my blog and visit my website. Please like or leave any comments or questions below or contact me directly via the form on my Manuscript Appraisal page. If any of the above themes appeal just click the title or cover to be directed to the Amazon page. 

Good News!

Now in Large Print in Commonwealth Libraries or direct from FA Thorpe Publishing

Good news! I do like to share good news… In Sickness and In Health, published in eBook and print by SapereBooks is now available as a traditional large print paperback from @Ulvercroft. Copies can be ordered via Commonwealth libraries. Our libraries have had a hard few years, but there are people who find it difficult to manage an eReader so it is lovely to see this market niche is still catered for.

Meet, Aneeta, winner of The Trisha Ashley Award 2022!

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I wanted to start my New Year interviews off with a celebration!  So, when I learned that Aneeta Sundararaj, one of my London School of Journalism students, had won The Trisha Ashley Award, I asked her to share the inspiration behind her winning story.

 Welcome, Aneeta,

First, thank you for inviting me to your website, Valerie. It’s much appreciated. I must also thank the organisers for running this competition, choosing my story to be forwarded to Trisha, and to Trisha for choosing it as the winning one.  

You are welcome, Aneeta, and I passed on your thanks to both.

Margaret James of Creative Writing Matters who runs the competition was delighted and explained,

When we first set up the Exeter Story Prize, Trisha asked if we would like her to sponsor an award for a quirky or humorous story, and we said lovely, please do. So, when Cathie, Sophie and I have read all the entries, we choose a few that we hope Trisha might like, and she picks the winner, who gets £200.  Also, anyone can enter the ESP, so Aneeta was up against some very well-published authors, and she did very well to win.

The Weathermen – A Love Letter was based on a conversation I had with my friend, Swagata. I was sharing some of the challenges that I (and many girls I’ve spoken to over the years) faced. When the phone call ended, I decided to write it all out. More than inspiration, writing this story was a form of therapy.

Trisha had this to say,

I loved the quirky and original voice of the narrator in this unusual story.  It was, for me, the knock-out winner and I hope will lead to much more writing success in future.

 So, huge congratulations, Aneeta!

When did you discover a need to branch into creative writing after a successful career as a lawyer?

I left legal practice a long time ago.  I didn’t plan on a full-time career as a writer. I knew it would take me at least three months to find another job. So, I wrote the first draft for The Banana Leaf Men  I found that I liked ‘this writing thing’ and decided to try it for a while longer. I’ve never stopped.

The Banana Leaf Men (Reprint)

You are an experienced writer/journalist – what appealed to you about the challenge of writing for the RomCom genre?

This is a very good question, Valerie. I think that it wasn’t so much a challenge, but more applying all I’d learnt thus far. It starts with my need for variety. For instance, for years, I was a contributing writer for the Lifestyle section of the Sunday papers. This meant learning the art of writing feature pieces. When this sojourn ended, I focused on writing/fine-tuning the novel, which came with its own set of elements to follow. Then, I did something completely different and that was to pursue a PhD which meant returning to writing for academia. Once that was complete, I went back to fiction. This time, I focused on the short story form and creative non-fiction, like a piece called ‘Lord of the Ocean’. This story was about an invasion near my hometown that happened close to 1000 years ago. So, The Weathermen – A Love Letter was part reportage, part academic writing with a huge dose of all the elements of writing fiction.

 What challenges did you find or did the story flow naturally as the idea occurred.

The main challenge was to strike that balance between  having the courage to tell the story, still respect the practices of the East and make it all plausible for a Western reader. Nothing is worse than reading stories about a Malaysian or Malaysians that I don’t recognise. It’s painful! The best example from The Weathermen – A Love Letter is when a spiritual master asked Anjali if she was ‘clean’ to make sure that she wasn’t on her period. I understand the religious strictures at play. However, ask any Indian girl how she feels when she’s asked this question in the presence of men and I guarantee her honest (operative word, here) answer will be a negative one. If she’s ‘dirty’, she cannot step into a spiritual centre or temple and is only good for sweeping up rubbish. We girls are taught to hide our shame, but I often wonder how a man would like it if I asked him, “Are you clean?” My challenge was to write this without causing maximum offence.

Whenever I’ve faced such challenges, I think of two things. One is that there must be readers like me elsewhere who are open-minded enough to appreciate the practices of others. I mean, if I can accept reading stories about stigmata and what people put themselves through during Easter, why can’t others understand what my people will put themselves through in the names of faith and religion. Second, I go back to the British television series, Yes Minister and Yes, Prime Minister. The topics discussed were always so serious, but the writing was entertaining and everlasting.

The Age of Smiling Secrets is an intriguing title – but the topic covered is very serious and highlights the problem of having religious law running alongside that of the country’s High Court, where the two can give conflicting outcomes. This is obviously a subject that is close to your heart. Why did you decide to write a fictional tale to illustrate the issue?

Thank you for saying that the title of The Age of Smiling Secrets  is intriguing.The Age of Smiling Secrets

I started to think about this story as early as 2005. As you’ve said, Malaysia is in the unique position where both the laws of Syariah and the Civil Law are practised concurrently. It was only a matter of time before conflicts about which jurisdiction should apply would arise. For ease of reference, my fictional story is based on the legal position when such conflicts arise. It’s about a family torn apart when a man converts to Islam and, without the consent or knowledge of his wife, converts their child as well.

As a lawyer, I understood the position of every person involved in this drama from the lawyers pursuing and defending the case, and the judges who had to hear the arguments from both sides, to the plaintiff, defendant and the children.

No one I know has ever looked at the all the emotions at play such as love, loss, betrayal, sacrifice and so much more. What happens when everyone returns home after a day in court? What does a parent say to the child at bedtime? “You’re my baby, but the court said you’re not.” How does the wife reconcile with the fact that the man she married is no longer her husband, or vice versa? And that’s simply because a court that has no jurisdiction over her says so? Why is the second wife accepted as a legal wife in one court and the husband is committing bigamy in another? Why is the child of the second wife considered legitimate in one court and the child of the first wife is considered illegitimate in another? Worse, how on earth does a parent explain all this to a child?

I cannot imagine what it must be like for a mother when the laws of the land allow her child to be taken away from her. So, these are the emotions I wanted to explore.

I must add that I remain surprised at how successful the publication of The Age of Smiling Secrets has been. I didn’t make much effort submitting the manuscript to agents/publishers after one of them asked me to fundamentally change the story so that a British reader would ‘get it’. It implied that the average British reader was too dumb to understand the conflicts that would arise and use of local lingo. I knew that this wasn’t the case. And after ten years of the story ‘percolating and marinating’ in my psyche, I wanted it published. So, I didn’t bother with the British publishing industry, stuck to the story I wanted to tell and worked with the wonderful team at MPH Publishers in Malaysia. I am not at all active on social media and I didn’t take part in the kind of publicity that I’ve seen so many authors do. I was, therefore, pleasantly surprised and delighted when the novel was short listed for the 2020 Book Award organised by the National Library of Malaysia. Furthermore, since it’s publication, edited versions of various chapters of this novel have been periodically included in various anthologies published internationally. Many readers have written to say that they cried at the end of reading the novel. Like all my books, once the first print run was over, I didn’t bother with another one. I’ve just placed them all on Amazon.com.

What is next for Aneeta?

I spent 2022 learning about submitting my short stories for many online competitions and literary journals. I figured out what it was like from the inside and, now, I’d like the chance to give back to others. So, together with a few friends, I’m using my website to host a short story competition. It’s called ‘Great Story Competition’ and we will open for submissions shortly.

Thank you, Valerie, for this chance to share my stories with you.

You are very welcome. I wish you every continued success with your projects and a happy and healthy 2023!

My thanks to Trisha Ashley Ashley gardn forgotten wishes author Margaret James 1A and to Margaret Jamesfor their kind comments and the team at Creative Writing Matters

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